Rewriting your fractured fairy tale.
Most of the time writing a good story takes several tries. Guess how many times I rewrote my story The Jalapeno Man before I got it like I wanted it.

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Reread your story.

Rewrite your story. Keep what you like and change what you think will make it better.

Do this as many times as you need to until you feel like it is right.

Now make your story neat. Look for grammar, spelling, and punctuation.